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雅思作文误区:观点含蓄
2018年06月12日 03:19
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对于雅思写作,如果根据中文写作那样写的话,同学们难免会进入一些误区,那么下面就和小编一起来看看雅思作文误区:观点含蓄。

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请看雅思写作误区实例:   

①it seems arbitrary to assume that older generation’s traditional ideas are not the right way in the present age.   

②First of all, international travel requires more than just money, People generate prejudice to(against) a place for their lack of knowledge about it   

 

再跟笔者提供的表达进行比较   

①older generations' ideas so often still have their place in a modern world。   

②people may build prejudice against a place on their ignorance of it during an international travel.   

雅思写作的观点句要求清晰明了,开门见山是最基本的要义,不要玩任何拐弯抹角的文字游戏。一位考官指出中国考生的作文,最致命的问题就是在导入段开始,一是表达自己观点不清不楚;二是话题都没有读懂,一动笔已偏题。这样的作文,开头寥寥几句读完,考官就给你定好了分数段了。   

 

开门见山的表达如何实现,其实很简单,用主动句,用主谓宾句型就可以了。 

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附雅思考官写作的导入段欣赏:开门见山范例   

①People have different views about how much choice students should have with regard to what they can study at university. While some argue that it would be better for students to be forced into certain key subject areas, I believe that everyone should be able to study the course of their choice.   

②It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidizing the industry.

 

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