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托福写作|独立写作素材哪里找(2)

作者: 2022-12-09 13:23 来源:南宁编辑
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写作作为一门输出型的考试,向来是真多同学头疼的,尤其是独立写作,非常需要大家有足够的素材积累,否则就容易「没话讲」。上次我们讲了独立写作素材的两个来源:

 

1. 门派正统教材:《新托福写作真经6》

 

2. 同门亲兄弟姐妹:综合写作

 

 

今天再继续补充一些其它的资料:

 

3. 同门直系师兄弟姐妹:阅读,听力,口语

有这样一道题:Nowadays each group member get the same grade, is it a good method to evaluate students? To give the same grade to all the members who do the same project together. What do you think of the way of evaluation?

 

每次在课上讲到这道题,很多同学第一反应都是「不喜欢group work」,因为「有一些摸鱼的不干活」。刚好在听力校园对话中也有这么一篇讲的是这种情况(看来不管是国内还是国外,浑水摸鱼的现象都不少见)。

 

托福听力TPO4-Conversation2

 

『....

 

Professor: Right, OK. And it’s not going well?

 

Student: Not really. I’m worried about the other two people in my group. They are just sitting back, not really doing their fair share of the work and waiting for an A. It’s kind of stressing me out, because we are getting close to the deadline and I feel like I’m doing everything for this project.

 

Professor: Ah, the good old free rider problem.

 

Student: Free rider?

 

Professor: Ah, it’s just a term that describes this situation, when people in the group seek to get the benefits of being in a group without contributing to the work. Anyway, what exactly do you mean when you say they just sit back? I mean, they’ve been filing following the weekly progress reports with me.

 

Student: Yes, but I feel like I’m doing 90% of the work. I hate to sound so negative here, but honestly, they are taking credit for things they shouldn’t be taking credit for. Like last week in the library, we decided to split up the research into 3 parts and then each of us was supposed to find sources in the library for our parts. I went off to the stack and found some really good material for my part, but when I got back to our table, they were just goofing off and talking. So I went and got materials for their sections as well.

 

Professor: Um … you know you shouldn’t do that.

 

Student: I know, but I didn’t want to risk the project going down the drain.

 

....』

 

从这个对话中,我们可以提取出一些可用的素材:

 

首先,这种评分方式可能会产生一些free riders. To be specific, 并不是每个人都有很强的责任感,所以it is highly likely that 有些学生不会devote wholeheartedly into the project, 反而是take advantage over其他学生, like just sitting back, not really doing their fair share of the work and waiting for an A, 而剩下的对学业分数更加重视的学生则不得不do everything for this project. For example, 一个三人小组split up the research into three parts并且everyone is supposed to find sources in the library for their parts. However,其中两个人想要seek to get the benefits of being in a group without contributing to the work, so it is not surprising for the third and more arduous student to find that当他给自己的部分找到了some really good material 然后 got back to our table的时候, 发现另外两个just goofing off and talking, 所以他不得不get materials for their sections as well.这样这个学生也可能会因为stressed out & getting close to the deadline而无法保质保量地完成任务,最终影响分数。

4. 同门旁系师兄弟姐妹:GMAT,GRE

 

真题:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For any business to be successful, it must spend a lot of money in advertising.

 

在GMAT写作中,有一个典型的逻辑错误叫做「profit问题」,出现的形式通常是「做某件事情可以带来更多的revenues,所以它能够带来profit,所以我们应该去做」,考生需要分析材料中提到的profit是否确有其事?学过小学数学的人都知道profit和revenue以及cost都有关系,但是这种材料不会两个因素都告诉考生,因此只要抓住一个点去提问,就能够对profit进行质疑。

 

所以,这个托福题目也一样,大多数企业认为的successful就是挣到钱,也就是我们前面提到的profit,而这边的a lot of money in advertising就属于cost的部分,因此可以整理成这样一个理由段:

 

其次,广告不一定能带来经济效益。广告只是一开始的一个诱因,消费者会因为一个公司的广告宣传去尝试它们的产品。Nevertheless,如果它们的质量不行,消费者最终没有得到满意的体验,Seldom will they try a second time. 所以广告能否带来经济价值还要看产品本身。Moreover, 广告费用往往很高,所以很多时候都会对公司造成经济负担,导致他们没有钱去做更重要的事情such as 产品研发、设备更新、人才招聘……这样肯定会影响公司的发展。

 

由于字数有限,我们今天还是没能把所有方法讲完,同学们可以先把前四种消化一下,剩下两种等到下次有机会再给大家介绍。

 

由于字数有限,我们今天还是没能把所有方法讲完,同学们可以先把前四种消化一下,剩下两种等到下次有机会再给大家介绍。

 

5. 其它门派:新闻素材

 

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