例句1
Alongside the instruction he received at the Royal College, Moore visited many of the London museums, particularly the British museum, which had a wide-ranging collection of ancient sculpture. (剑 15 Test 3 Passage 1)
1)结构分析
层次一:
主句:Moore visited many of the London museums
修饰①:alongside.......Royal College【介短状,修饰整个主句】
修饰②:particularly......museum,【例子】
层次二:
修饰②内部:
主体:particularly the British museum
修饰:which..........sculpture【which定从,修饰British museum】
结构总结:主句+介短+例子【嵌套定从】
2)译文分析:红体字代表主干,括号代表修饰,大括号包括小括号
(除了在皇家学院接受的指导外),摩尔还参观了伦敦的许多博物馆,【特别是(收藏了大量的古代雕塑的)大英博物馆】
3)重点词汇:
alongside:和...., 伴随着.....
instruction:n. 指导
a wide-ranging collection of:(词组)大量收藏的
ancient:adj. 古代的
sculpture:n. 雕像
例句2
Critics who had begun to think that Moore had become less revolutionary were proven wrong by the appearance, in 1950, of the first of Moore’s series of standing figures in bronze, with their harsh and angular pierced forms and distinct impression of menace. (剑 15 Test 3 Passage 1)
1)结构分析
层次一:
主句:Critics were proven wrong by the appearance
修饰①:who ........revolutionary【who定从,修饰critics】
修饰②:of .......... menace
层次二:
修饰②内部:
主体:appearance of the first of Moore’s series of standing figures in bronze
修饰:with.....menace【介短定,修饰figures】
结构总结:主句+定从+介短【嵌套介短】
2)译文分析:红体字代表主干,括号代表修饰,大括号包括小括号
那些(开始认为摩尔不再那么具有革命性的)批评家们(在 1950 年)被证明是错误的, 因为【摩尔的批的(形状粗糙的,棱角分明的,带有明显的威胁感的)青铜站像的】出现。
3)重点词汇:
series of:(词组)一系列的 一批
critics:n. 批评家们
revolutionary:adj. 革命性的
menace:n. 威胁 恐吓
appearance:n. 出现
figure:n. 人像 轮廓 人形
distinct:adj. 与众不同的 明显的 独特的
impression:n. 印象 感觉
例句3
There were calls for his resignation from the Royal college, and the following year, when his contract expired, he left to start a sculpture department at the Chelsea School of Art in London. (剑 15 Test 3 Passage 1)
1) 结构分析:
层次一:
主句:There were calls for his resignation and he left to start a sculpture department
修饰①:from.....Royal college【介短定,修饰resignation】
修饰②:the following year.....expired【时间状语,修饰and后的整个主句】
修饰③:at the Chelsea School of Art in London【介短状,修饰and后的整个主句】
层次二:
修饰②内部:
主体:the following year
修饰:when......expired【when定从,修饰the following year】
结构总结:主句+介短+时间状【嵌套定从】+介短
2)译文分析:红体字代表主干,括号代表修饰,大括号包括小括号
收到从皇家学院辞职的要求后,【第二年, (当他的合同到期时)】,他就离开了,然后去了(伦敦切尔西艺术学院的)雕塑系。
3)重点词汇:
resignation:n. 辞职
contract:n. 合同
expire:v. 到期
call for:(词组)要求
sculpture department:(词组) 雕塑系