Depending on what scores my students are aiming for, I give different advice.

根据学生的目标分数，我通常会给出了不同的建议。

If you are aiming for band 5, 5.5 or 6:

You can reach band 6 with fairly 'easy' language if

1 essay structure is good 结构正确

2 Ideas are relevant to the question topic, and you write at least 250 words. 审题不跑题

3 Work on writing short, simple sentences to express your ideas. 写正确的句子

When people get band 5 or below, it is often because they don't finish their essays, they go off-topic, they have no idea about good essay structure, or they try to use 'difficult' language and therefore make lots of mistakes. For bands 5 to 6, keep your essays simple and clear.

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当学生拿到5分或更低的分数时

1 他们跑题

2 他们不知道什么是好的论文结构，

3 试图使用“难”的语言，因此犯了很多错误

If you are aiming for band 7 or higher:

First, you need to do everything that I mentioned above: you need relevant ideas, a good essay structure, and you must write at least 250 words. At this level, good essay structure is not enough, and memorised linking phrases won't help either.

But to reach the higher scores, your essays need more 'depth'.

1 You need to explain your ideas in more detail 更多拓展

2 Using a wider range of vocabulary. 使用更多的词汇

3 Your focus should be on real content. 话题词伙，而不是复杂连接词

以上是对雅思写作5.5和6的区别在哪里的介绍，希望能帮助到大家。